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#1 awika

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Posted 02 August 2010 - 05:17 PM

This following game is lacking a story here give me a sec to write it........ Ok here we go. King Steve is in control of the 5th legion of castle crasher you are one of them. After rising through the ranks you become a commander knight. You have fought in many battles facing near suicide missions right in the eye but it is not enough. You are betrayed after being sent after the leader of a thieving gang. Since you were top knight you were more than capable killing a few dopes with swords. But you are still injured. You collapse and pass out. What Happens Next.

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Posted 02 August 2010 - 05:38 PM

The following story may go off topic rated PG-13

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Posted 04 August 2010 - 10:02 AM

well

our hero looks around trying to figure out where he is. He can't really remember why he is there or how he got there. while he gets up he fells the soft grass pressing against his palm... grass... he mutters to himself "why do i care about grass?" he stands up and imediately falls down from from pain and nausea. -"how long have i been out for?" he says quietly to himself. he looks at his armor and sword for any signs about how long he is been out. his armor has several old blood stains on it that look about 2 days old, same with the sword. guesing from the pain in his chest he recons that the blood is his own.

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Posted 04 August 2010 - 11:13 PM

The bodies of the knights you killed aren't there anymore. What happened to them You mutter to yourself.Then a bush rustle to your left side and you dive for your sword waiting for whatever the heck it is to stop being a pansy and come out and fight...

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Posted 05 August 2010 - 08:48 AM

(out of character: so basically our hero whom should have a name btw remembers the fact that he is a knight and that they betraid him, but he doesn't remember the objective which was to find and kill the thief leader. oh yea and are we talking in gods perspective or the hero's perspective? )

Even the simple act of moving was painful but if that... thing got any closer it would probably got a lot more painful.

(O B S! I'm creating a new character here because the hero needs someone to interact with)

the "thing" emerged, it was a small thing, about a meter and wearing an odd hood and coat seemingly covering the entire body. the cloth was patchy at best and made with huge visible stitches. he is carrying a small bow and arrow on his back. the figure seemed oddly familiar, like as if he was of some importance in our hero's past. He reckoned that he should talk to the thing and if it wasn't friendly, well, then he would cut his tiny head off.

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Posted 06 August 2010 - 11:09 AM

ding dong, It's CAN SOMEONE REPLY TIME? :lol:

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Posted 12 August 2010 - 02:04 AM

The creature thing grows many low guttural responses to all of your question. You are starting to have second thoughts about not killing the thing in the first place.

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Posted 22 August 2010 - 10:43 AM

OOC:how am i supposed to respond to this? :?
I made the thief character so our hero can have someone to talk to which means that either A: the thief can talk or B: he cant talk but is freindly and they begin using body language to cummunicate. (this could be an intresting aspect because then they might misunderstand each other and thus getting into trouble)

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Posted 24 August 2010 - 06:17 PM

wahhh! why does no one respond :cry:

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Posted 06 September 2010 - 09:18 PM

Then suddenly rainbow unicorns come up and kill the thief. The new castle crasher is saddend by this and kills himself.



THE END

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 12:23 AM

but its not over yet:
a gray knight sent by king steve comes and kills the unicorn then brings you and the small theif back to life with CPR he then explains that you are possibly the last of the castle crashers(they just disappeared out of no where)and then you start to remember the events that lead up to this...

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Posted 08 September 2010 - 07:13 PM

Our hero is now deeply confused. he has never seen a unicorn nor has he seen the small knight in front him. He is not quite sure how he managed to save the thief (or why he did it in the first place) But the rambling grey "grunt" has tugged at a memory locked inside him. Maybe out of kindness the gods aren't allowing him to remember what ever happened. all he know is that he was a knight sent on a mission of some sorts.

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 10:10 PM

Suddenly a group of barbarians jump up from behind a couple of trees, threatening you, the gray knight, and the small theif. The gray knight then emits a grayish steam and he then summons about thirty arrows killing the barbarians. you then start to remember who that is your old friend Johnny Stone.

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Posted 09 September 2010 - 10:35 PM

After seeing Johnny`s corageous act you then start to remember... A shadowy figure under the sparse moonlight; this creature stole something... something vital for the survival of your kingdom... you then remember how it massacred your kingdom, the gem was the source of its power. You then start to remember your quest...

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Posted 11 September 2010 - 12:24 PM

which was to kill the leader of the theif gang, but for some reason you forget how you got there in the middle of the woods, and some how you know it has to do with the little theif.

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Posted 11 September 2010 - 01:11 PM

suddenly it hits you that kid is the son of the leader of the theives, woodstock, you remember that this kid helped you escape from the theives and a group of about five other people."Why did you save me?" you ask. "because i was tired of being a theif." he explained in a whimpering voice. "That doesn't matter right now, we have to tell the king what has happened." the gray knight ordered. So they left off to the king's castle.

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Posted 11 September 2010 - 08:22 PM

OCC: I have decided to call our hero Nort. if this is not a good name please do tell!

Things were moving fast indeed. the three figures were now quickly approaching the "kings castle". outside 4 Knights were still fighting barbarians. then he realised who they were and thought to himself "oh no, not these idiots!". The four knights all wore brightly coloured armour of red, green, orange and blue. Nort, John and the thiefs party went up to the knights and Nort asked the simple question "were is the king?" The four knights stared blankly at Nort. eventually one got bored and wandered off into some pit while the green one hit the blue one with the butt of his sword and the red one decided to give himself some electro shock therapy and shot a thunder bolt into his arm. -never mind, muttered Nort.

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Posted 19 September 2010 - 08:25 AM

lets just keep reffering to him as the knight because not everyone can relate to a character with a name ;)

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Posted 19 September 2010 - 05:41 PM

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what do you mean?

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Posted 24 September 2010 - 10:30 PM

lets just keep reffering to him as the knight because not everyone can relate to a character with a name ;)


Yeah i agree. Any way back to the story:

So our trio continued into the castle asking where the king was, and yet all of the gray knights stared at them with shock and surprise. Finally they asked the right person a gray knight that had a long tear in his armor, and they are told that the king was attacked and killed by an ambush of thieves and barbarians. This surprised our trio except for the small thief, but he kept to himself.

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Posted 26 September 2010 - 04:21 PM

After the knight finished, the knight asks what happened to our hero's armor since its specked with blood and scared with many tears(not as bad as his but it sure does look bad) our hero explained to him about how he thinks that Woodstock saw through his ruse as a theif and he sent barbarians and that mysterious group of 5 to kill the hero. As he was saying this the small thief nodded his head and sayed,"Right to the very last details." Our hero then asked what the scared knight name is and he asked the same question to the small thief, the scared knight told them that his name is Jake Dunun, and then it was the thief's turn to answer, he told him with a sort of a twisted darkness in his eyes, "My name is Loki."

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Posted 29 September 2010 - 06:10 PM

It was impossible to react quick enough. the whole thing must have taken 10 seconds.

Lock (I took away the i so it sounds more scary :P)

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Lock throws his patch work coat to the ground revealing a deadly looking set of throwing knifes attached to a belt around his waist. 1

He quickly takes three of the knifes and throws them at the grey knights. All three gets hit in the throat, hitting the major artery lying there. 2, 3

all three knights fall down and hit the floor. thud. 4

Our hero and johnny get the there swords out of there holsters. 5

Lock throws a knife into johnnys arm and one in our heros too. 6

Our hero tries to stop the blood by pressing with the other arm and looks up at lock. Lock grins back with a twisted smile. 7, 8

lock throws a smoke bomb to the ground. 9

the smoke clears and he is gone. 10, 11, 12.

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Posted 29 September 2010 - 10:07 PM

Then our hero gets up and starts chasing lok (lok just is spelled cooler like that) and when he catches up with him he finds him jumping off the castle onto a flying crystal riding it a demented knight with wings and somehow he could feel death attached and a vague connection to him and also a mysterious man wearing a hood with a wand. They escape then the four colored knights show up and our hero tells them what just happend. They remember thier past! Apparently they had taken brain damage in their adventure and forgot everything. The king threatened the life of the
Princesses not to tell them... But they don't learn that quite yet. The four knight go to get their wives... but non of them are alive.

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Posted 01 October 2010 - 12:36 AM

Angerly, our hero helps up his old friend, and then realizes that Jake is dead along with two others, this makes our hero stare at the the scar on his chest and he realized something, immediately he riped off his glove and his own and he saw that they both had the mark of the original king's army crest, an army of gray, the first king, King Leo, the first gray knight.

by the way before we go any further what color should our hero's armor be?
I think it should be white exept for the + on his chest and the out line on his helmet like the normal castle crashers exept white.

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Posted 01 October 2010 - 02:51 AM

I think we should name our things In chapters so

Chapter 2: the white knight

Our hero remembers how he became the second white knight. It was a bloody battle surviving the 10 rounds of death but when our hero conquered them he earned the title of the white knight earning the privilege of training under the first. With this he gained the power to make an un-dead army from the bodies of the dead, also being allowed to wield the sword of life and death. But who is this first white knight.

Chapter three: the knights realization

The white knight regroups with the others starting their epic quest to stop this mysterious evil. But on thier way to the peasants store the white knight saw 4 peasants carrying a coffin on this coffin it said the birth date and home town of someone. The knight knew only one person was born on that day in that town. Their was a priest showing the peasants where the graveyard was he looked at our hero when he came to his realization, he knew that face far to well. The knight remembered when he killed the 5 petty thieves. He discovered 4 bad things and 1 horrible thing. He went over to the peasants and killed them all, the priest to far away for him to care about. He opened the coffin and finds a body, he puts his head in it sobbing and the runs away with it.

Chapter four: the priests tale

The four knights try to catch him but theres a fog and there on a hill, to dangerous to run on. The priest goes over to them and tells them he is probably at the graveyard. So they go and found them there. The red knight goes over to him and pics him up by his shirt and punches him in the face saying "why the heck did you kill them" then the priest puts his hand on his shoulder and says "I know that face you made when you saw the coffin, the same face i made when I saw my dead wife" the red knight then let's him go and puts his head down, still thinking he deserves to have the crap beaten out of him, but still "she's your wife isn't she" our hero looks down to his right. The priest says "I'll take that as a yes." "how'd your wife die" Asked the blue knight the priest replied "well we were kidnapped by the sea ninjas. The leader... gave her a child. She soon decided she had enough, though it was the child of a monster, it was still a child. So when the child was born, later that night... We found her with a slit in her throat and a bloody knife in her hand. But the face you made... It looked like something more... As if if was your fault?" the white knight replied "when I saw her coffin I remembered somthing, at the dinner the king invited me to... There was a magician. And the food was drugged, after I was drugged the king told me to kill the thieve leader, there were 5 thieves trying to kill me. But they wern't thieves, one was a blue princess, then a red one, then a green one, then an orange one... But the last wasn't a princess, it was Lucy... My wife. The drug made me think they were thieves... And kill them all"




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